Some more comments on language would be useful. For example what sort of relationship does your magazine try to have with its reader? Is it trying to be like a big brother or sister? Or is it trying to have an authoritative formal relationship? Have you used slang? Or lots of second person pronouns? Lots of exclamation marks? What do these things suggest about the relationship with the reader?
Some more comments on language would be useful. For example what sort of relationship does your magazine try to have with its reader? Is it trying to be like a big brother or sister? Or is it trying to have an authoritative formal relationship? Have you used slang? Or lots of second person pronouns? Lots of exclamation marks? What do these things suggest about the relationship with the reader?
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